My cat (a doggerel)

My cat (a doggerel)

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04-13-2013, 08:02 AM

(04-13-2013, 07:43 AM)serge gurkski Wrote: they are bastards! ;-) they simply need sparring.
From a formal perspective I find no nits.
I only stumbled over "pharaohs" in the last line (is the second syllable pronounced as a diphthong carrying one accent on the first vowel in English, because in German it is: phAr-a-Oh-nen "pharaohs").
Is pharaohs pronounced like farrows?
cheers
serge

Fair - ohs

this is just awful. It is blushingly faux-poetic - Milo

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My cat (a doggerel) - by Crepuscule - 04-13-2013, 07:19 AM

RE: My cat (a doggerel) - by Volaticus - 04-13-2013, 07:32 AM

RE: My cat (a doggerel) - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-13-2013, 07:35 AM

RE: My cat (a doggerel) - by Crepuscule - 04-13-2013, 07:41 AM

RE: My cat (a doggerel) - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-13-2013, 08:29 AM

RE: My cat (a doggerel) - by serge gurkski - 04-13-2013, 07:43 AM

RE: My cat (a doggerel) - by Crepuscule - 04-13-2013, 08:02 AM

RE: My cat (a doggerel) - by serge gurkski - 04-13-2013, 08:06 AM

RE: My cat (a doggerel) - by Crepuscule - 04-13-2013, 09:13 AM

RE: My cat (a doggerel) - by billy - 04-13-2013, 09:18 AM

RE: My cat (a doggerel) - by heslopian - 04-13-2013, 10:52 AM

RE: My cat (a doggerel) - by Crepuscule - 04-13-2013, 07:00 PM

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