My cat (a doggerel)

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The best bit is the title.

My cat (a doggerel) - oh my.

I really enjoyed it, to start with. I don't have much critique for it because I find it to be a sound poem. I'm not sure however about '(he relishes banana skins)'. I think it interrupts the flow too much for it to be worth the content.

Although the first line is strong I don't know if the whole 'I hate you, you hate me' is a bit overdone. Perhaps 'It's evident my cat hates me.' or something similar?

I don't really hate him.