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Falling Apart
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04-13-2013, 05:53 AM
I really like first and last stanzas due to the fact that they are obviously very well thought out and they flow from line to line very well. However, I feel that the middle of the poem isn't as powerful and goes a bit off the rail and is too much. The final two lines are fantastic and are a perfect way to finish off the poem. Good stuff!
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Falling Apart - by thelittleking - 04-12-2013, 07:50 AM
RE: Falling Apart - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-12-2013, 08:59 AM
RE: Falling Apart - by billy - 04-12-2013, 01:57 PM
RE: Falling Apart - by Simba - 04-13-2013, 05:53 AM
RE: Falling Apart - by Ajax - 04-16-2013, 06:26 AM
RE: Falling Apart - by JaimeeKent - 04-18-2013, 03:19 AM
RE: Falling Apart - by phrvshtumblr - 04-19-2013, 01:02 AM
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