Waiting for spring -4 liner

[maddy]

I was having an email conversation with a friend of mine about the late spring this year and I said:

As the spring is lurking behind the drapes of unwavering rain
Hesitant to mark the end of the shiny white snow’s reign
and until the mighty yet life-bearing sunrays kiss the dormant buds
let Maddy’s exploration of the Badger State begin, not stopping even if the paths are filled with muds.

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