the sweetness of dark
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Hi there UnicornRainbowCake, thank you so much for reading and commenting. This is a poem that I have played around with too much. I really needed to leave it alone or give up on it. I appreciate your opinions very much. I am posting the original, written before I began obsessing with it, and will leave it at that.
Thank you so much.
my best,
Heart
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the sweetness of dark - by Heartafire - 04-12-2013, 12:34 AM
RE: the sweetness of dark - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-12-2013, 07:47 AM
RE: the sweetness of dark - by Heartafire - 04-12-2013, 12:55 PM
RE: the sweetness of dark - by ESmith - 04-13-2013, 04:19 PM
RE: the sweetness of dark - by Heartafire - 04-14-2013, 07:21 AM
RE: the sweetness of dark - by heslopian - 04-14-2013, 09:32 AM
RE: the sweetness of dark - by Heartafire - 04-14-2013, 10:30 PM
RE: the sweetness of dark - by popeye - 04-14-2013, 09:51 AM



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