04-12-2013, 05:33 AM
Alright, first of all, thank you for the critiques, really appreciate them!
So, I do understand what you both mean, and have adapted/modified the poem accordingly.
Do forgive me though, as I would like to retain the "to the bitter end!" however cliche it might be, nonetheless, thank you guys for the feedback!
So, I do understand what you both mean, and have adapted/modified the poem accordingly.
Do forgive me though, as I would like to retain the "to the bitter end!" however cliche it might be, nonetheless, thank you guys for the feedback!