Poetry, My Ole Friend

[UnicornRainbowCake]

It was on the top of my mind as I was thinking the poem through, I thought it added to the overall flow of the poem though?

In a way, yes, and in a way, no. I think the actual words roll on the tongue well and it flows in that aspect, but some of your words like 'acrimony' don't necessarily have a direct impact and understanding for the reader, then they have to think about it, halting the flow...

I'm no etymologist, and it's perhaps just me that has to think about some of the words you've used, but that's just how my eyes have seen this.

It's a matter of balancing out the nicely flowing words and the understanding to get the perfect mix of both.