04-12-2013, 01:12 AM
Hi Amy,
Yeah, I think you're right about it being a matter of who's reading it. I'm slightly leaning towards keeping it as it is, and not make a strict rhyme scheme. Not sure yet, though. Got some thinkin' to do
And thanks again for all the useful critique, and I'm glad you like the poem better now
Hi karinane,
I really appreciate your kind words It means a lot to me. Also because this was a poem I was about to give completely up on, a couple of times. But I'm glad I didn't.
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment
Yeah, I think you're right about it being a matter of who's reading it. I'm slightly leaning towards keeping it as it is, and not make a strict rhyme scheme. Not sure yet, though. Got some thinkin' to do
And thanks again for all the useful critique, and I'm glad you like the poem better now
Hi karinane,
I really appreciate your kind words
It means a lot to me. Also because this was a poem I was about to give completely up on, a couple of times. But I'm glad I didn't.Thanks for taking the time to read and comment