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When the Creep Cats Come to Town (first edit)
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04-12-2013, 12:14 AM
Though I once was, I am not a fan of rhyme anymore with the exception of internal rhyming when it is good. I do think you have done a rather good job with this. I don't feel force in your rhyme. I enjoyed reading this (I found it a bit lengthy and that is a turn-off for me, but I stuck with it. Glad I did).
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When the Creep Cats Come to Town (first edit) - by karinane - 04-11-2013, 01:01 AM
RE: When the Creep Cats Come to Town - by Snags - 04-11-2013, 08:10 AM
RE: When the Creep Cats Come to Town - by karinane - 04-11-2013, 12:11 PM
RE: When the Creep Cats Come to Town - by rowens - 04-11-2013, 10:59 PM
RE: When the Creep Cats Come to Town - by karinane - 04-11-2013, 11:41 PM
RE: When the Creep Cats Come to Town (first edit) - by rowens - 04-12-2013, 12:02 AM
RE: When the Creep Cats Come to Town (first edit) - by Heartafire - 04-12-2013, 12:14 AM
RE: When the Creep Cats Come to Town (first edit) - by Volaticus - 04-12-2013, 01:35 AM
RE: When the Creep Cats Come to Town (first edit) - by Snags - 04-12-2013, 01:54 AM
RE: When the Creep Cats Come to Town (first edit) - by Simba - 04-13-2013, 05:30 PM
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