04-11-2013, 11:29 PM
It gets to a good point. Your poems are happenings, they're fast and moving away.
What bothers me is that I feel bad when I'm trying to be a good person, and the other person isn't; so I'm at a disadvantage. And then when I stop being a good person, because they're not; they still hold me up to standards that neither of us can hold given the bullshit circumstances. So I'm always at a disadvantage.
So the only way anything can get done is if you're a bad person from the start. That way, there's no expectation.
I think good people only have happy love lives by pure luck. The people that get the most love are monsters. I'm a monster, but I'm a freak monster. When I try to be a good person, people are shocked and run away in confusion.
Anyway, that's what I felt and thought after reading this short poem.
What bothers me is that I feel bad when I'm trying to be a good person, and the other person isn't; so I'm at a disadvantage. And then when I stop being a good person, because they're not; they still hold me up to standards that neither of us can hold given the bullshit circumstances. So I'm always at a disadvantage.
So the only way anything can get done is if you're a bad person from the start. That way, there's no expectation.
I think good people only have happy love lives by pure luck. The people that get the most love are monsters. I'm a monster, but I'm a freak monster. When I try to be a good person, people are shocked and run away in confusion.
Anyway, that's what I felt and thought after reading this short poem.