04-11-2013, 04:06 PM
(04-10-2013, 07:24 PM)serge gurkski Wrote: Humming soothings to my heart
like a tomcat close to death, Would 'purring' be carrying the simile too far?
On Good Friday I am bleeding
for a liar crucified: I like this.
No more blood of lambs on doorposts.
First of Passovers has passed! I'm thinking you could remove 'First of'. There was only one true passover, and no more. Everything else is a hollow imitation.
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with Hebrew at ablemuse: http://www.ablemuse.com/erato/showthread...post281997
with music at my blog:
http://gurkski.wordpress.com/2013/04/10/pass-not-over/