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[AisforApple]

The last stanza is probably my favorite, and I really like how "The last time they met was back where it began" and you repeat the Anonymous, homogenous from the first stanza (going back to where it began).

I understand why the third stanza is necessary, showing how the relationship has become more monotonous, but it's just kind of "meh" (which I guess is the point, but the poem is still strong without it). I wouldn't get rid of it, but maybe just play around with it a little. I really do like "from an occasion to occasional", definitely the strongest line in the stanza for me.

Thanks for the read