04-10-2013, 10:12 PM
Tektac, forgive me for dropping just a few words and being unable to offer any suggestions for improvements ( will endure the 40 lashes if need be ...make that 20) This is a beautiful text. Congratulations!
Here:
need to be where sea sobs shore...
Where wild hart roar…
Where stars are crushed…
Where nights are hushed…
Where air is made…
Where time will fade.
near perfection
Heart
Here:
need to be where sea sobs shore...
Where wild hart roar…
Where stars are crushed…
Where nights are hushed…
Where air is made…
Where time will fade.
near perfection
Heart