04-10-2013, 08:53 AM
It just came across as a poorly constructed criticism. There's actually a link on the forum about what to look for in a critique. Here if you need it http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=3505
Also you make some rather unfounded assumptions about my poem, such as the time i spent on it, and the critique came across as quite unprofessional. It's one thing to pan my poem, that's acceptable, it's one thing to tell me you disliked it and saw it as nonsense, that's fine, but it just seems incorrect to assume my intention for writing the poem or my investment in it.
Also you make some rather unfounded assumptions about my poem, such as the time i spent on it, and the critique came across as quite unprofessional. It's one thing to pan my poem, that's acceptable, it's one thing to tell me you disliked it and saw it as nonsense, that's fine, but it just seems incorrect to assume my intention for writing the poem or my investment in it.