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if my dog could writer verse..
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04-05-2013, 07:02 AM
(04-05-2013, 06:44 AM)Kurtzzz16 Wrote: I like the poem as a whole. The only flaw that there really is, in my eyes, is the flow of the poem and the adjectives that you used.Though we appreciate feedback here, please read the guidelines for each forum -- as this is Serious Critique and requires more than vague comments/ admin
It could be worse
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if my dog could writer verse.. - by lewis taylor - 04-04-2013, 06:10 PM
RE: if my dog could writer verse.. - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-04-2013, 06:48 PM
RE: if my dog could writer verse.. - by milo - 04-04-2013, 06:54 PM
RE: if my dog could writer verse.. - by Kurtzzz16 - 04-05-2013, 06:44 AM
RE: if my dog could writer verse.. - by Leanne - 04-05-2013, 07:02 AM
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