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04-04-2013, 10:06 AM

Thanks so much Smiffy and Billy for reading and commenting. I appreciate your thoughts on this. Billy,
I have clarified the ambiguity in the final stanza, thank you for the suggestion.
My best!

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in a dark room - by Heartafire - 04-01-2013, 09:58 AM

RE: in a dark room - by Smiffy - 04-03-2013, 03:30 PM

RE: in a dark room - by billy - 04-03-2013, 03:45 PM

RE: in a dark room - by Heartafire - 04-04-2013, 10:06 AM

RE: in a dark room - by justcloudy - 04-05-2013, 01:00 AM

RE: in a dark room - by Heartafire - 04-05-2013, 03:35 AM

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