04-03-2013, 08:32 AM
(02-06-2013, 04:35 AM)sqai Wrote: To bend and not breakThis is a nice hybrid. Tells the story of all life from birth to death.
Newborn leaves soft and supple
Brittle are the dead
(03-21-2013, 01:18 AM)softlyfalling Wrote: This is just beautiful. I almost think it would have more impact and power if the comparison in the last line is changed to inescapable truth, the outcome...like thisTrue, more exacting too, less abstract.
To bend and not break
Newborn leaves soft and supple
Brittle in death

