Three Hours In Heaven
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your language is all very endearing and there are times when lines are pleasantly tangible. I would, however, hesitate to imply anyone is 'perfect' or compare them to weapons or drugs. It comes off a little cheesy and it's a bit of a contradiction when you think about it.

Thanks for the read,
Lew
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Three Hours In Heaven - by Smiffy - 04-02-2013, 06:51 AM
RE: Three Hours In Heaven - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-02-2013, 06:59 AM
RE: Three Hours In Heaven - by Smiffy - 04-03-2013, 01:49 AM
RE: Three Hours In Heaven - by serge gurkski - 04-02-2013, 07:43 AM
RE: Three Hours In Heaven - by lewis taylor - 04-02-2013, 08:55 AM



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