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Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon

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04-01-2013, 11:15 AM

I'm still not sure how you got Clint Eastwood. >< The last line of yours should be 'to transform', right? The imagery is nice, but it feels like it's lacking something more... substantial I feel. That only females are mentioned explicitly makes me wonder if it's talking about rape. Yeah. Anyway, I'll be back with my move and poem.

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Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 02-24-2013, 11:45 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 02-24-2013, 01:05 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 02-25-2013, 08:41 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 02-25-2013, 10:21 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 02-28-2013, 06:30 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-03-2013, 01:56 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 03-04-2013, 12:25 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-04-2013, 03:59 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-04-2013, 10:01 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 03-05-2013, 12:12 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-05-2013, 01:38 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 03-05-2013, 02:05 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-06-2013, 04:56 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 03-06-2013, 04:41 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 03-11-2013, 11:12 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-11-2013, 12:10 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 03-12-2013, 03:50 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-12-2013, 11:21 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 03-13-2013, 02:11 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-15-2013, 06:09 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 03-20-2013, 10:25 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-23-2013, 05:42 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 03-26-2013, 01:34 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 03-26-2013, 11:34 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-26-2013, 06:35 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 03-26-2013, 07:51 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-26-2013, 08:35 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-30-2013, 11:54 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 08:18 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-01-2013, 03:17 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 04-01-2013, 12:52 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-01-2013, 09:10 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 04-01-2013, 11:15 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-01-2013, 12:35 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 04-02-2013, 09:52 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-03-2013, 01:08 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by billy - 04-03-2013, 04:11 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-03-2013, 06:33 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 04-03-2013, 07:37 PM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-16-2013, 07:04 AM

RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 05-12-2013, 10:39 PM

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