03-31-2013, 11:46 PM
(03-31-2013, 01:42 PM)trueenigma Wrote: I feel like most of the lines were forced by the rhyme, you want to avoid writing things just to make them rhyme. "the dream within a dream". Lol plagiarizing the script for Inception?It's a technically bad poem, I know. But it's to hard to revise, so I'll just leave it be for now, and focus on some of my other, better poems. But no, no copy, lol
I wrote it way before I saw the film

