03-31-2013, 09:57 AM
I agree with Billy here, the edited version is much more concise. This is another poem that could comfortably move into the mild critical forum if you wanted additional help with it.
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Chrysanthemums - by UnicornRainbowCake - 03-31-2013, 06:48 AM
RE: Chrysanthemums - by milo - 03-31-2013, 06:58 AM
RE: Chrysanthemums - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 07:09 AM
RE: Chrysanthemums - by Todd - 03-31-2013, 07:19 AM
RE: Chrysanthemums - by UnicornRainbowCake - 03-31-2013, 07:37 AM
RE: Chrysanthemums - by Todd - 03-31-2013, 08:10 AM
RE: Chrysanthemums - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 08:39 AM
RE: Chrysanthemums - by billy - 03-31-2013, 09:48 AM
RE: Chrysanthemums - by milo - 03-31-2013, 09:57 AM
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