03-30-2013, 01:18 AM
Hi billy,
Thank you very much for your comments
And I think that you are right. I think the whole poem reeks of clichés and is just not very original. It was also inspired by another artist. I really got to work on that: When I get inspired, I have to be careful, and not make my poem sound so much like what or who inspired me.
Thanks for taking the time
- Volaticus
Thank you very much for your comments
And I think that you are right. I think the whole poem reeks of clichés and is just not very original. It was also inspired by another artist. I really got to work on that: When I get inspired, I have to be careful, and not make my poem sound so much like what or who inspired me.
Thanks for taking the time
- Volaticus