An Object (short poem)
#4
I agree that the last line should just be left off. Leave some room for discussion about what the object is.

Without that line, I would've spent some time trying to figure it out. It's well written otherwise!
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An Object (short poem) - by Jae Mc Donnell - 03-15-2013, 09:12 AM
RE: An Object (short poem) - by NakedBear - 03-15-2013, 01:29 PM
RE: An Object (short poem) - by Volaticus - 03-29-2013, 12:44 AM
RE: An Object (short poem) - by IdiomsNCliches - 03-29-2013, 03:10 PM



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