03-29-2013, 03:46 AM
Hi,
Impressive first poem. I could really feel the emotion, especially in the first verse. But to me, it's like the words in the second verse don't flow as easily, as in the first verse. But thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading it
Impressive first poem. I could really feel the emotion, especially in the first verse. But to me, it's like the words in the second verse don't flow as easily, as in the first verse. But thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading it