03-29-2013, 12:44 AM
Hi,
I liked this one
But I also noticed, that in L6, maybe you should replace "my" with "its". And with the poem being kind of a riddle, I would suggest maybe removing the last line, or reworking it a bit.
- Volaticus
I liked this one
But I also noticed, that in L6, maybe you should replace "my" with "its". And with the poem being kind of a riddle, I would suggest maybe removing the last line, or reworking it a bit.- Volaticus