emerging

emerging

rowens
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03-27-2013, 10:46 PM

You seem like you agree with pruning and tightening stanzas. That's the most sensible thing to continue doing. It works with the subject matter of the poem, the struggle of writing it seems more suitable to the subject than the way the subject's being handled as it is.

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RE: emerging - by justcloudy - 03-05-2013, 12:35 AM

RE: emerging - by billy - 03-05-2013, 02:32 AM

RE: emerging - by justcloudy - 03-05-2013, 05:54 AM

RE: emerging - by billy - 03-05-2013, 07:14 PM

RE: emerging - by justcloudy - 03-05-2013, 09:10 PM

RE: emerging - by Mattie - 03-16-2013, 03:56 AM

RE: emerging - by justcloudy - 03-27-2013, 06:46 AM

RE: emerging - by rowens - 03-27-2013, 10:46 PM

RE: emerging - by allykat727 - 03-28-2013, 05:34 AM

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