03-26-2013, 05:43 PM
Just a thought as you work on this metaphor, you might consider renaming this "Hourglass" and removing all direct references to it from the poem.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Sand in the Hourglass - by Gabe Wikle - 03-26-2013, 12:58 PM
RE: Sand in the Hourglass - by Todd - 03-26-2013, 05:43 PM
RE: Sand in the Hourglass - by Smiffy - 03-30-2013, 08:22 PM
RE: Sand in the Hourglass - by Heartafire - 04-01-2013, 10:05 AM
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