03-26-2013, 05:26 PM
I want to respond before I read the previous comments, knowing that i will succumb to insecurity about my thought in the wake of those words...
Every image seems to flash a brief light on the those darknesses between columns of light of consciousness. I know these interims. I lived in those shadows most of my life. Thank you for the candle.
I am fending off the jaded consequence of absorbing your intent. Although I love those lacunae of time...twilight, dusk, midnight, ides...the void between worlds is too frightening. The vacuum of uncertainty won't let me breathe in there.
But, I don't want you to change one word. Why risk undermining such impact with over-thinking?
Every image seems to flash a brief light on the those darknesses between columns of light of consciousness. I know these interims. I lived in those shadows most of my life. Thank you for the candle.
I am fending off the jaded consequence of absorbing your intent. Although I love those lacunae of time...twilight, dusk, midnight, ides...the void between worlds is too frightening. The vacuum of uncertainty won't let me breathe in there.
But, I don't want you to change one word. Why risk undermining such impact with over-thinking?