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Comme un Violon
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03-26-2013, 05:10 PM
(03-26-2013, 05:04 PM)softlyfalling Wrote:I like it. I might suggest a slight change on your final two lines to simply:(03-25-2013, 09:38 PM)Todd Wrote: I think so, or harmony. It's the actual music though so it feels closer to what you might want.What is your response to the edit? Curiouser and curioser.... We are one music. Beyond that, no issues at all.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Comme un Violon - by softlyfalling - 03-21-2013, 12:10 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by Todd - 03-21-2013, 12:55 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by softlyfalling - 03-21-2013, 01:00 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by Todd - 03-21-2013, 01:18 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by NakedBear - 03-21-2013, 04:12 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by softlyfalling - 03-21-2013, 01:10 PM
RE: Comme un Violon - by tmanzano - 03-22-2013, 08:33 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by softlyfalling - 03-22-2013, 08:48 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by DoReMi - 03-23-2013, 04:52 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by Todd - 03-23-2013, 04:57 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by softlyfalling - 03-25-2013, 09:11 PM
RE: Comme un Violon - by Todd - 03-25-2013, 09:38 PM
RE: Comme un Violon - by softlyfalling - 03-26-2013, 05:04 PM
RE: Comme un Violon - by Todd - 03-26-2013, 05:10 PM
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