03-25-2013, 08:19 AM
I really enjoyed the concept of this poem. It was very unique and different. I especially love this part. "It’s just a ring/It’s just a vow/And both are empty at the center./And how we talk around it,/this void we know so well." But I want to urge to ask why do you claim vows to be empty as well. I can see where it makes sense but just want to know your view. That's an interesting topic.
