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New, never shared my writing.
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03-25-2013, 05:49 AM
I really enjoyed the beat/tempo you had going at the beginning. Personally, I don't see the need for the repetition here: "And all I remember is bracing,/bracing for impact that never comes." But, it's all your artistic expression. I'm just giving opinion.
 Good write though. I enjoyed it!
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New, never shared my writing. - by Goneau - 03-23-2013, 02:53 PM
RE: New, never shared my writing. - by saeity - 03-23-2013, 10:40 PM
RE: New, never shared my writing. - by newsclippings - 03-23-2013, 10:57 PM
RE: New, never shared my writing. - by softlyfalling - 03-23-2013, 11:14 PM
RE: New, never shared my writing. - by Goneau - 03-24-2013, 01:57 AM
RE: New, never shared my writing. - by newsclippings - 03-24-2013, 04:20 AM
RE: New, never shared my writing. - by PeaceGirl Wilkins - 03-25-2013, 05:49 AM
RE: New, never shared my writing. - by Goneau - 03-25-2013, 01:12 PM
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