Barefoot Girl
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Oh goodness I love this. Ancient Greece... mountains and sea... salty air and loneliness... just beautiful. The feel to it is perfect, but just one question and one comment-- is her father a slave trader or slave master or something? I guess it doesn't seem so since she's helping with the sowing, but then why is his harvest stained? Also, having Helicon and Hellenic in a piece so short seems a little like overkill, and I'm not sure how air can be Hellenic? But anyway, beautifully done. =]
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Barefoot Girl - by softlyfalling - 03-24-2013, 11:41 PM
RE: Barefoot Girl - by justcloudy - 03-25-2013, 04:06 AM
RE: Barefoot Girl - by softlyfalling - 03-25-2013, 08:51 PM



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