I know it’s winter still

[milo]

Hi milo,
Thanks for your response. I don't mind harsh comments, they only help me to get better. I have not written any sonnets till now so I cannot decide on them. You can decide what will be best for me in this learning phase

Ok, I took a stab at the first one. This is novice so I think we are safe chatting here without the mods bringing out the electric collars. If they see us, if they find us, just remember the code . . .