03-23-2013, 09:27 PM
While there is nothing more breathtaking than mornings with perfect new snow and trees branches cocooned in ice that sparkle in cold sun, the sad truth is that the perfect snow gets mushy and muddy and the cold sun is left just being....cold. But did you not all dance naked Imbolc-inspired dances last Wednesday? Spring has swept in wearing her brand new bonnet!
I don't know if my critiques are very helpful because so often I just want the poem to stay just as it is. If there are no errors in grammar or punctuation and no glaring conflicts and inconsistencies and if I "GET" it...I always want to embrace and respect the original vision.
I don't know if my critiques are very helpful because so often I just want the poem to stay just as it is. If there are no errors in grammar or punctuation and no glaring conflicts and inconsistencies and if I "GET" it...I always want to embrace and respect the original vision.