Teacher

[Todd]

Hi Wjames,

I like this. Here are some comments for you. Just an opinion but I think you could pare this down quite a bit and be better off. Here's something you could do for instance:

A brilliant light
that’s gone to waste.

Exploring plots
with disregard,
for clear-cut truths.

Our cartoon brains
can’t comprehend
the words she spins,
the twist; the end.

So gladly,
I walk out the door
and know my thoughts mean
nothing more,
than love.

Those are the essentials in my opinion. Just thoughts.

Best,

Todd