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Comme un Violon

Comme un Violon
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#10
03-23-2013, 04:57 AM
To DoReMi's point.

You could go one level deeper and replace making music with the actual music;

Maybe replace the last two lines with

We are one note.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Messages In This Thread
Comme un Violon - by softlyfalling - 03-21-2013, 12:10 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by Todd - 03-21-2013, 12:55 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by softlyfalling - 03-21-2013, 01:00 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by Todd - 03-21-2013, 01:18 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by NakedBear - 03-21-2013, 04:12 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by softlyfalling - 03-21-2013, 01:10 PM
RE: Comme un Violon - by tmanzano - 03-22-2013, 08:33 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by softlyfalling - 03-22-2013, 08:48 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by DoReMi - 03-23-2013, 04:52 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by Todd - 03-23-2013, 04:57 AM
RE: Comme un Violon - by softlyfalling - 03-25-2013, 09:11 PM
RE: Comme un Violon - by Todd - 03-25-2013, 09:38 PM
RE: Comme un Violon - by softlyfalling - 03-26-2013, 05:04 PM
RE: Comme un Violon - by Todd - 03-26-2013, 05:10 PM



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