03-23-2013, 04:05 AM
At the risk of finding out I missed the whole point, I am going to suggest that you omit the "throwing up" chapter. Here is why, above and beyond throw up being EEWWWWWW....I am thinking this is some sort of statement of greed, ingratitude and imperious disdain for life...the perpetrator consumes greedily, sucks out the life, and then spits out the ruined result. Kind of like big business.