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03-23-2013, 01:00 AM

Hi Softlyfalling,

This is really good. I like the way you lost the auxillary verb in the 2nd line of every stanza, made it different.

Cheers Smile

~Neena

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RE: You - by softlyfalling - 03-23-2013, 03:54 AM

RE: You - by NakedBear - 03-23-2013, 01:21 PM

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