Thanks for the constructive feedback people, I can see how this one was confusing. The whole thing was based around the feelings you (or maybe more correctly, I) get when feeling lonely/depressed/angry, and you see a happy couple flaunting their love.
The first stanza wasn't meant to be anything concrete, just sort of expressing the subconscious state of mind the person seeing the couple is in before he/she does. I'll probably make some changes to this one later. Thanks for reading
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The first stanza wasn't meant to be anything concrete, just sort of expressing the subconscious state of mind the person seeing the couple is in before he/she does. I'll probably make some changes to this one later. Thanks for reading
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