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Man & Wife
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03-22-2013, 09:58 PM
This flows so beautifully, I wanted to read it over and over just for the rhythm. But yes the story leaves a bit to be desired. Also, the mystical quality of the first stanzas vs the rest threw me a bit. Not necessarily a bad thing, just a tad confusing. Even among the confusion, I still love it. =]
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Man & Wife - by Wjames - 03-22-2013, 12:37 PM
RE: Man & Wife - by NakedBear - 03-22-2013, 01:57 PM
RE: Man & Wife - by cidermaid - 03-22-2013, 05:27 PM
RE: Man & Wife - by justcloudy - 03-22-2013, 09:58 PM
RE: Man & Wife - by softlyfalling - 03-22-2013, 11:06 PM
RE: Man & Wife - by Wjames - 03-23-2013, 12:45 AM
RE: Man & Wife - by Wjames - 03-26-2013, 02:04 AM
RE: Man & Wife - by justcloudy - 03-26-2013, 02:21 AM
RE: Man & Wife - by Keith - 03-26-2013, 06:23 AM
RE: Man & Wife - by Wjames - 03-26-2013, 11:51 AM
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