When He created you
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Hi Mikey,

Thank you so much for your response and encouragement. Yes I guess you are right about the technicality of the first line, will surely come up with an edit. I am trying my best to comment on others' poems at least after I post one of mine.
Thanks once again Smile
~Neena
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When He created you - by neena2504 - 03-21-2013, 06:53 PM
RE: When He created you - by NakedBear - 03-22-2013, 02:44 PM
RE: When He created you - by neena2504 - 03-22-2013, 05:18 PM
RE: When He created you - by Volaticus - 03-28-2013, 06:23 AM
RE: When He created you - by neena2504 - 03-28-2013, 05:00 PM
RE: When He created you - by billy - 03-31-2013, 10:08 AM
RE: When He created you - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 01:49 PM
RE: When He created you - by neena2504 - 04-01-2013, 02:42 AM



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