03-22-2013, 05:18 PM
Hi Mikey,
Thank you so much for your response and encouragement. Yes I guess you are right about the technicality of the first line, will surely come up with an edit. I am trying my best to comment on others' poems at least after I post one of mine.
Thanks once again
Thank you so much for your response and encouragement. Yes I guess you are right about the technicality of the first line, will surely come up with an edit. I am trying my best to comment on others' poems at least after I post one of mine.
Thanks once again
~Neena

