Edit # 2:
No hope left,
I’ve lost my will
to live.
No dope left,
I’m out of pills
and gin.
Embracing surface
symmetry.
Rejecting purposed
imagery,
of sheltered smiling
searching sunset
infancy.
Dreamcast silver
solid pikes,
made out of human skulls.
Window seated
man and wife,
drown the coach with love.
Angry voices in my head
sense the sight
and smile.
Midnight murder flowing red
cold delight
reviles.
Original:
Dreamcast silver
solid pikes,
made out of human skulls.
Window seated
man and wife,
drown the coach with love.
Angry voices in my head
sense the sight
and smile.
Midnight murder flowing red;
cold delight
reviles.
No hope left,
I’ve lost my will
to live.
No dope left,
I’m out of pills
and gin.
Embracing surface
symmetry.
Rejecting purposed
imagery,
of sheltered smiling
searching sunset
infancy.
Dreamcast silver
solid pikes,
made out of human skulls.
Window seated
man and wife,
drown the coach with love.
Angry voices in my head
sense the sight
and smile.
Midnight murder flowing red
cold delight
reviles.
Original:
Dreamcast silver
solid pikes,
made out of human skulls.
Window seated
man and wife,
drown the coach with love.
Angry voices in my head
sense the sight
and smile.
Midnight murder flowing red;
cold delight
reviles.

