Comme un Violon

[softlyfalling]

Comme un Violon

Your fingertip confessions
Resonate on my arching neck.
You breathe deeply,
Lips parted.
I sing with every rhythmic stroke
On my humming body.
We are as one
Making music.

I know it is my second one today....I will do LOTS of commenting to atone

This is seductive. From a mans perspective I have always been the most taken by the need of my partner for me. The more they wanted me, the more intoxicating the romance would become and the more, in turn, I needed them. This is what I take from this sexually charged yet tasteful piece.

"On my humming body"

wonderful, much enjoyed. Great line.[/font]

I thank you, kind gentleman. I found it challenging to edge as close to erotic as i could and still be sublime. The previous ones I wrote were far too abstract to even come close. It would be easier to jump over the line and write authentic erotica, really.