03-21-2013, 05:54 PM
Hello all,
Please help me improve my writing, your suggestions, critic comments will help me shape these scribblings. Thanks a lot...
A Silent Prayer
Each morning the rising sun utters a silent prayer,
as its rays serene and white,
take the world in a loving embrace.
One more dawn, one more beginning,
one more chance to set things right,
to lead the soul to Divine Grace.
Why are the souls so morphed and masked?
What is the cause of humanity’s plight?
Why so deep in worldly stupor is every face?
Each morning the light beckons
but darkness in the hearts glows bright
blinds the eyes and leads the race.
Please help me improve my writing, your suggestions, critic comments will help me shape these scribblings. Thanks a lot...
A Silent Prayer
Each morning the rising sun utters a silent prayer,
as its rays serene and white,
take the world in a loving embrace.
One more dawn, one more beginning,
one more chance to set things right,
to lead the soul to Divine Grace.
Why are the souls so morphed and masked?
What is the cause of humanity’s plight?
Why so deep in worldly stupor is every face?
Each morning the light beckons
but darkness in the hearts glows bright
blinds the eyes and leads the race.
~Neena