I'm told

I'm told

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#17

03-21-2013, 03:50 PM

What about making a small evocative change to diversify and not repeat - the second time, say "silent sheets/cold meals". Now that's lonely, isn't it.

Just a suggestion. I really love the poem, and I think it captures loneliness.

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I'm told - by NakedBear - 03-13-2013, 12:57 PM

RE: I'm told - by Leanne - 03-13-2013, 04:06 PM

RE: I'm told - by Wjames - 03-14-2013, 04:33 AM

RE: I'm told - by NakedBear - 03-14-2013, 01:46 PM

RE: I'm told - by Leanne - 03-14-2013, 05:19 PM

RE: I'm told - by Keith - 03-15-2013, 08:35 AM

RE: I'm told - by NakedBear - 03-15-2013, 03:25 PM

RE: I'm told - by Mattie - 03-16-2013, 03:09 AM

RE: I'm told - by justcloudy - 03-18-2013, 06:13 AM

RE: I'm told - by NakedBear - 03-18-2013, 05:21 PM

RE: I'm told - by softlyfalling - 03-18-2013, 08:07 PM

RE: I'm told - by softlyfalling - 03-18-2013, 04:42 PM

RE: I'm told - by Carile - 03-18-2013, 08:30 PM

RE: I'm told - by justcloudy - 03-18-2013, 11:00 PM

RE: I'm told - by wannawrite1 - 03-20-2013, 04:09 AM

RE: I'm told - by Rodthegod - 03-21-2013, 01:31 AM

RE: I'm told - by mariamuse - 03-21-2013, 03:50 PM

RE: I'm told - by AnnaLisa198111111 - 03-23-2013, 04:34 AM

RE: I'm told - by Leanne - 03-23-2013, 05:29 AM

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