Serious help with writing poems that stay in the lines of the title of the work

[Leanne]

There are plenty of poetry practice exercises in the forum specifically designed to help you with your writing -- I would suggest you take advantage of these as nobody can possibly answer all your questions. You are the only person who knows what you want to write, and exercises will help you decide how.

But if I have one piece of advice here and now, it's "go easy on the exclamation marks!"