03-19-2013, 04:55 AM
Todd and Leanne.... I appreciate your supportive critiques...thank you. I understand that I write about certain emotions and experiences in the abstract, mea maxima culpa... I can only be completely candid and say that the circumstances of my life have prevented much in the way of actual world and love experience. Dreams I know, but these are, by nature, an abstraction of reality. Soul...who can know?
I will sincerely work on fleshing out my poetry with imagery that readers might relate to (Excuse the dangling participle!)..I only fear that what I can manufacture in my mind will not really do the trick.
I will sincerely work on fleshing out my poetry with imagery that readers might relate to (Excuse the dangling participle!)..I only fear that what I can manufacture in my mind will not really do the trick.

