03-18-2013, 04:06 AM
"sanction" does work well indeed 
There are lots of exercises to help with meter on site, especially in this thread, but getting the rhythm fixed in your head and then fitting in the words -- as it sounds like you've done -- is a very good place to start. As to whether it's appropriate -- it is if it sounds good, that's the only requirement as far as I'm concerned!
There are lots of exercises to help with meter on site, especially in this thread, but getting the rhythm fixed in your head and then fitting in the words -- as it sounds like you've done -- is a very good place to start. As to whether it's appropriate -- it is if it sounds good, that's the only requirement as far as I'm concerned!
It could be worse