03-17-2013, 06:39 PM
I re-edited the poem thanks to the advise given. I hope this version is better. Give yours opinions!
Quote:Dazzled by the sunlight,
woken by May's drizzle,
the spring wind blows softly.
And then came autumn,
the days went by and the memories faded away.
Nearest and dearest passed away quickly,
and me cradled to the deathbed.
No farewell tears,
my funeral was lonely.

