Bridge
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Thank you SO much Leanne! I am not educated in literature and meter is hard to grasp when self taught. I appreciate your feedback..I loved it, really. Could you check over the edit I did please?
I am not sure exactly what iambic pentameter is, but i was hearing the words a certain way and was going for consistency. Is the meter inappropriate to the form?
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Bridge - by softlyfalling - 03-17-2013, 04:35 PM
RE: Bridge - by Leanne - 03-17-2013, 04:57 PM
RE: Bridge - by softlyfalling - 03-17-2013, 05:06 PM
RE: Bridge - by Leanne - 03-17-2013, 05:16 PM
RE: Bridge - by softlyfalling - 03-17-2013, 05:43 PM
RE: Bridge - by Aphroditeny - 03-18-2013, 12:12 AM
RE: Bridge - by justcloudy - 03-18-2013, 03:35 AM
RE: Bridge - by softlyfalling - 03-18-2013, 05:04 AM
RE: Bridge - by Leanne - 03-18-2013, 04:06 AM



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